Could you rate this story I’m writing? It’s only the first part?
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That was…um…..
LOL very funny! the only thing is that the starting of paragraph 4 when you say ‘she was hiding behind trees’ makes me kinda confused cause you’re jumping to a different scene, so maybe put something before that?
I thought that was absolutely horrible.